So does my poetry suck?

Danny Danny Danny,it would be great if you named your poem with your question here, let her decide herself, you obviously feel greatly towards her, and you are all about pion, that's also obvious, and its taken you some time to do, so enjoy the moment with her, have her give you a grade on it so to speak, let her actions speak louder than her words if she loves you too, go to a park, forest, river seaside, bring a blanket and a good bottle of red, picnic away your afternoon with her and then show her your poem, its time for romance my young friend